An Editorial on Neural Modification and Writing in Layers

I’ve been getting this feedback through lots of small little snippets. Based on what I’m hearing, there’s at least a limited perception that Sophie tweaking Alex’s mental state is somehow a weakness or her coddling him.

My intent is simple:

Alex is a mental patient. You know, big damn hole in his head and missing gray matter. That twitchiness? Strange conflicts? Panic attacks? Sudden and intense depression? Spontaneous anger or mood swings? Promiscuity? Bouts of cold logic and apathy? That’s based on my experience with people with neurological damage or antisocial personality disorder. It’s what makes it such a realistic case for neural hardware in the first place.

Alex isn’t magically “better” after his accident. He’s got permanent damage and has to deal with the repercussions of it. Anything beyond him being a compliant but squishy robot requires software in the implant to work.

That requires Sophie to continually adjust the code in his personality matrix. Something that is wildly incomplete at this point. She has to make continual changes to make it all work.

On the flip of that, Sophie has been building up their shared matrix to make herself more human. In effect, stealing his thought processes for her own.

The MC Alex, the guy most of the story is about, is really a hybrid consciousness. A delicate ballet between biology and technology. It’s really one of the core philosophical aspects that few really ponder. We’re looking down the barrel of this from a societal stance already. There are thousands of books that discuss porting of a complete mind into VR scenarios, but there’s a critical in-between step that humanity is likely to encounter. Neural implants, enhancements, AI-based electrical stimulation. Some of this, we’re tinkering with already.

The question I want people to ask themselves is when we begin editing our minds, are we really still ourselves? At what point does the “messy” biology no longer matter? Are we willing to give that much of ourselves away? As you progress down that path, would digitizing a personality end up becoming eventually nothing more than an advanced chatbot on a neural network? Does it even matter?

In this case, it’s clear that Alex’s mind isn’t exclusively his own. That hybrid consciousness is a spinning plate on a stick that takes continued adjustments from both sides. He does not have a complete personality. He simply doesn’t. It’s not been written in his software yet. So, yes, per mutually agreed upon bounds, he is continually adjusted to keep him on track. In most cases, it’s no more coddling that your thermostat coddles your HVAC unit. It might be done with a loving hand, but it’s still just flipping the controls to keep things going.

That’s my intent anyway. It’s not to magically make him a “weak MC” or something from a (insert genre of books that I have never read). I’m not leaning into a trope. It’ll probably surprise most, but I’ve literally never read a Manga or light novel, and my only Anime experience was a roommate in college that insisted on having DBZ running 24×7 so I found excuses to be elsewhere.

Instead, I’d like to think that I’m creating a progressive journey that calls into question some of the very real issues humanity is going to have to address over the next few decades. I may have to fine-tune my messaging though, so feel free to let me know when I’m drifting too far off point, or belaboring the issue.

Quantum Escape is Out Now!

This was a fun one to write. It ended up quite the action-packed thriller.

Covalent Technology’s unveiling of the next generation of Mesh caused ripples felt worldwide. In one move, Alex and Sophie not only launched their latest money-making scheme but also their opening salvo in their war against the rogue AI that stands to destroy all those that might oppose it.

Such a thing was always bound to attract attention. Months of careful moves had been taken to prepare, but when one stray phone call blows their cover, the response is immediate and lethal. Plans come crashing down as Homeland Security, Chiwen, and a betrayal that will shake Alex to his core converge.

With a ticking clock, Alex and the Black Flags are thrown into their deadliest battle yet in a desperate bid to keep Sophie online as they fight for their very lives.

There are deals to be made, and lives to be taken. The blood gods are hungry.

Quantum Beginnings Audiobook Release!

Hey all! If you enjoy digesting your books through your ears, Quantum Beginnings just dropped on Audible. It’s 13.5 hours of Near-future Cyberpunk, Hard Science, Emergent AI’s, and non-fade-to-black fun.

Quantum Beginnings hit a #1 bestseller in Hard Sci-Fi, and the reviews have been fantastic, so I’m hoping it’ll do well over on Audible.

Disclaimer: contains both weird but real quantum physics and mature content. It’s firmly aimed at those who enjoy their sci-fi realistic, their characters complex, and relationship status as “it’s complicated.” 

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Entangled Fates 3 update

Hey all, just a quick note that we’re roughly on track for a February release for Quantum Escape, Entangled Fates 3. Editing and rewrites are mostly done, so I’m working on cover art and a few other things behind the scenes.

If you are interested reading early-chapters or giving feedback on the artwork hit up my Facebook Group:

Facebook Group for Entangled Fates / Quantum Beginnings

Ever have one of those moments when you realized that you did a thing, but never told anyone you did a thing?

Yeah… So, I put together a Facebook Group for the book series. I’ve got details on some community perks I’m considering. If you would like to vote on what Artwork, Side Stories, Character Sheets, and such that I put together, hit me up over at:

If you are interested in going the next level and directly supporting the series, I’ve got a Patreon site over at:

Quantum Proliferation Release

Well, there goes the neighborhood. Quantum Proliferation is going live across the globe as I type (Nov 15). Kudos to those who start reading at midnight tonight.

If you like this series, please share the news that the second installment of the Entangled Fates series is out across all of those groups that might be interested.

Also, please leave a (written) review for the book if you liked it. Those are incredibly important, especially for indie authors like myself. Each one means a lot, both on the marketing side, but also to myself. I literally make a poster of the book cover with the reviews around it. Anytime I have a bad day, or consider not writing, I read those reviews to get inspired. That and Muse threatens me with the immersion blender.